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Forgive Me My First Love by UrbanRural-Photo Forgive Me My First Love by UrbanRural-Photo
So little to say but so much time,
despite my empty mouth the words are in my mind.
Please wear the face, the one where you smile,
because you lighten up my heart when I start to cry.

Forgive me first love, but I’m tired.
I need to get away to feel again.
Try to understand why, don’t get so close to change my mind.
Please wipe that look out of your eyes, it’s bribing me to doubt myself;
simply, it’s tiring.

This love has dried up and stayed behind,
and if I stay I’ll be alive,
then choke on words I’d always hide.
Excuse me first love, but we’re through.
I need to taste the kiss from someone new.

Forgive me first love, but I’m too tired.
I’m bored to say the least and I, I lack desire.
Forgive me first love, forgive me first love, forgive me first love, forgive me first love, forgive me, forgive me first love, forgive me first love

Adele - First Love

GPS Location:
Lat: N 47° 37.89
Long: W 122° 17.8279
Fix Time Jul 31, 2008 3:47PM
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:iconcelesteisaoklooker:
Celesteisaoklooker Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
liretlly,for me, forgive me my first love :"/
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:iconnightcitylights:
Nightcitylights Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2008  Professional Photographer
Great capture! :clap:
And I like the title: it reminds of some things gone to past... Thanks ;)
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you. When people tell me of stuff like that then I know I am getting it right.
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:iconnightcitylights:
Nightcitylights Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008  Professional Photographer
:)
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:iconadamswife:
AdamsWife Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2008
The bench is well placed in the frame and beautifully framed with the foliage. :clap:
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you. Means a lot coing for you.
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:iconadamswife:
AdamsWife Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2008
You are very welcome :-)
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:iconla-vita-a-bella:
La-Vita-a-Bella Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2008   Photographer
Hmmm....a nice bench to rest on after a long hike! Thanks! :D
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Well it was a short walk in the city but let go with the hike. LOL
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:iconla-vita-a-bella:
La-Vita-a-Bella Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2008   Photographer
:giggle:
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:iconlaurengary:
laurengary Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2008
Oh no... someone isn't really leaving, they're coming back. A young mother or baby sitter just jumped up off the bench & picked her little boy up off the grass & as soon as she's done dusting him off, she'll be back to sit under the tree again.

In just a few minutes.
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Nice. I like the way you think.
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:iconesperimenti:
Esperimenti Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008
Just love it! Wonderful shot and lines. Well done! Thank you for sharing. :+fav:

:worship: :clap: :nod:
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you for the comment
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:iconesperimenti:
Esperimenti Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2008
The pleasure is still very much mine.

:sun: :sun:
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:iconcanuckgurl22:
canuckgurl22 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008
I really like the mood of this photo and the fact that it's shot from the back of the bench, something unique. The lighting is great too how it brings the focus to the bench. :)
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you
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:iconjacmiss:
jacmiss Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008   Photographer
I'm not a big fan of the angle but it doesn't mather becuase the colors is amazing.
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you. I think the angle was a little rushed.
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:icondavincipoppalag:
davincipoppalag Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Methinks thou dost wax poetic! .. Nice one Shelly
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you
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:icondavincipoppalag:
davincipoppalag Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome sir
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:iconbad95killer:
bad95killer Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008
the branch going from the corner to the other....very nice composition :)
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you, good to hear from a Nikon Fan
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:iconbad95killer:
bad95killer Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008
yes bro....its all my pleasure :)
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:iconelleelise:
elleelise Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008
I like the colors. I wish I could see more of the chair though, or is that the point?
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks and that is what I wanted you to feel. Like some is leaving.
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:iconelleelise:
elleelise Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2008
I like the colors. I wish I could see more of the chair though, or is that the point?
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:iconurbanrural-photo:
UrbanRural-Photo Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks and that is what I wanted you to feel. Like someone is leaving.
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